Proposals worth implementing take a lot of work, no matter what stage of development they're in. I've done it long enough where I can manage it well to skip a few drafting steps on my own.
[His comment doesn't go unheard, whether he wanted it to or not. Until he reads over the entire concept thoroughly and indicates as much, Cagalli remains quiet. She observes him, keeping mental tabs on what he rereads or skips back to, a little relieved that's where she pegged those reactions may arise.]
No, and that's what I'm hoping for. We're essentially starting from the ground up with the bare bones of the city. Bureaucratic jargon meant for political pencil pushers isn't useful here. They're regular people, and that's exactly who this is meant for.
[Meaning as far as she's concerned, helping this place is the main driver of this proposition.]
Athrun, Yzak, Dearka, they all had or have family on the Council. Procedure of this sort may be unfamiliar, but they're not completely blind to it-- As far as I know, you are. I needed to make sure this can make sense to someone without related background knowledge.
no subject
[His comment doesn't go unheard, whether he wanted it to or not. Until he reads over the entire concept thoroughly and indicates as much, Cagalli remains quiet. She observes him, keeping mental tabs on what he rereads or skips back to, a little relieved that's where she pegged those reactions may arise.]
No, and that's what I'm hoping for. We're essentially starting from the ground up with the bare bones of the city. Bureaucratic jargon meant for political pencil pushers isn't useful here. They're regular people, and that's exactly who this is meant for.
[Meaning as far as she's concerned, helping this place is the main driver of this proposition.]
Athrun, Yzak, Dearka, they all had or have family on the Council. Procedure of this sort may be unfamiliar, but they're not completely blind to it-- As far as I know, you are. I needed to make sure this can make sense to someone without related background knowledge.